Progress 11/05/13

I am currently on the process of writing my introduction. For me this is the most difficult step because i am never satisfied with my introduction. I try to include some details of what i am going to write in my paper, but i want to try to catch the readers attention so they will want to read my paper and not be bored. I am trying to follow my outline because it has everything i want to talk about, but i have a problem with run on sentences so i may get of topic so i need to improve on that. Status- Need to start