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Hi Tenzing

I am having the same problem. I choose to do my own topic so i think that im the only one writing about this topic. I did not know we had to make a cover page so thank you for telling me. If you cant find no one that is doing your topic just continue searching and you will find a lot of information.

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I finally finished writing my paper, now i need to start revising. My topic was about the benefits of switching to a veterinarian diet, which highlighted three main points. The meat industry, the affects of meat on your health, and the benefits of switching to a plant based diet. I feel that my paper is good but i still need to expand on my last two topics, because i wrote a few facts but there is a lot more to write about. My grammar needs to be corrected  and some punctuation may need tom be added. I have enough sources but i still need an academic source. Also when i am citing in need to correctly use MLA citation.